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I live in the middle of nowhere. Our town isn't on any maps, it's too small. Our town has a population of about 300 people.

And all of us are BMXrs. We all know each other and we all hang out together. It's simple here- until you really look around and stay about a year or so....but I'll explain that later.

Welcome to Crupiville, USA.

Chapter One

Breezy

Breezy Erwin was like any normal teenage BMXr girl. She trained, raced, and was a 3.7 student at Deseret Peak High School. She was an only child and was spoiled when it came to BMX gear and bike parts. She had all of the best, and was one of the best.

Her neighbors were her competiton, Kira Michelle Lynell and Tessa-Rayanne (TR) Thomas. They lived on either side of her and the three of them were always fighting and bickering over the races.

The hottest teenager in all of Crupiville lived across the street from her. His name was David. He was one of the fastest and one of the frendliest. Whenever the girls were bickering with Breezy, she would go over to David's house and they would hang out.

One of these days was when it all began.

Breezy sat in a "lovesac" chair in David's living room. They were watching "Chronicles of Riddick" with David's two friends, Andy and Matt.

Breezy was the only girl, and was glad that she was at the moment. David had invited her in when he heard the girls screaming out at Breezy "CHEATER" and "PHONEY" and....well, lots of vulgarites were screamed.

She looked to David and studied his face for a moment. He was focused on the screen. He had blode hair and big blue eyes. He had perfect skin and was smiling, he had a cute smile.

Breezy then looked to Andy. Andy was buff, like David and Matt. He also had blond hair, but he had a big nose and a smug looking smile. He had big brown eyes too.

Lastly she looked at Matt. Matt had a bit of acne- but it was not too bad. He had brown hair and brown eyes. He had a cute smile as well and you could see how defined his abs were- because you could see the shape of them through the t-shirt he was wearing.

Muscles were a big thing in Crupiville. Only girls did not have them. Guys knew who did and didn't because guys were always walking shirtless around the parking lot at the bike track. Winter did not exsist and neither did an indoor series.

Breezy smiled and her thoughts turned to the big 4th of July party they wold be having that evening. The state had built the city a huge indoor arena, with about 4-5 acres or green grass with a dozen or more pavillions on it. Every weekend (even if there wasn't holidays) the town would go there and they would have barbeque. On holidays people would go out of town and buy fireworks, (sometimes alochol and cigrattes) "toys" (such as giant water guns and paintball guns) and many other little "treats."

Breezy and her dad had driven a little over five hours to get to a local fireworks stand and bought fireworks for the party tonight. Earlier that day Breezy and her mom made "Gramahm Cracker Suprise" which wasa city favorite. This part was guarnetted to be a successs from the Earwin Family.

"Breezy!" David's mom called out. Breezy looked behind her and smiled as David's mom (Mrs. Williams) walked down the stairs and into the basement. "Hey, your mom wants to know if your going to come home now or not..."She looked back at David, who was standing on the couch and peeking out the window.

"Are they still out there screaming?" She asked him. He shook his head 'no'. Breezy turned back to Mrs. Williams. "I better go then."

The boys paused the movie and all yelled their good byes as Mrs.Williams and Breezy walked to the front door.

"Breezy, thank you for not being like those hurendous young women you live next door to." She said looking at her. She placed her hands on Breezy's sholders. "I can't believe you are actually going to be sixteen next week." She said, then smiled at her warmly. "You won't have any problems finding a great guy to date." She paused. "This is Crupiville."

'This is Crupiville,' was a phrase said to all children when discussing childrens future. Breezy smiled and nodded, then after a moment of saying goodbye, left.

Some may think otherwise, but Breezy deep-down thought Crupiville was a dark and scary place- underneath it all.

She walked briskly across the street and noticed that there was someone looking at her from over the fence at TR's home. She tried to quicken her step- to avoid any tourture that may occur- but then tripped and fell in the street. Emabarrassed, she got up and hurried inside her home.

They all BMXed. They went to the races until they were too old to leave their home. They dated BMXrs and married BMXrs. Their children were able to race BMX at a very young age and broken bones were stores that were often told. Pro's were born in Crupiville every year, and racers were born with the ability to be Pro's like thier parents. There were about 36 male teenagers between the ages of 14-17. There were 14 female teenagers between the ages of 13-18. At Desert Peak High School there were about 100 people that attended that school- including teachers and staff.

This is Crupiville, USA.

Chapter Two

Jessica

Jessica Jamison was- well a barbie. She had a perfect body, long blond hair and a really perfect smile. All the guys loved her and she loved all of them. Since she had turned fourteen she had not been single for more than a day or two. She was a barbie.

Jessica also had taken it upon herself to judge all of the other girls that lived in Crupiville. She even kept entries of her judging. For Example: Breezy Earwin is a tomboy that may never get a date to save her life. She needs to go out of town and buy what we call "girl clothes". Girls cannot wear boy jeans and national t-shirts and expect ot get a date.

Jessica looked in her full length mirror and smiled. She was wearing a levi mini-skirt and a black tank-top that said "Lizard Skins" across the chest. Her hair was in a bun and stands of her hair fell elegantly onto her neck.

"At least I look like a girl." She said. "Unlike those other girls." She was reffering to girls like "TR" and "Breezy". She did a slow circle, then after knowing that she looked good, slowly walked out of her room holding her shoes, (3 1/2 inch black high heels) and headed out to the driveway where her car (a red, 2002, Honda) sat. Then, after setting her stuff inside on the passengers seat, she backed out of her driveway and headed to the pavillion park. Also known by the townspeople of Crupiville as "The Grass track."

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Chapter Three

Dani

Dani was not like any normal BMXr teenager. She did not normally wear race clothes, but she still had fun racing and showing that she liked the sport in many other ways. But the odd thing about Dani- was that she moved into Crupiville.

Most folks in Crupiville had lived there for about two to three generations. The older folks of the town had parents that setteled there first and the kids can talk about how their great-grandparents helped build city hall.

Dani was thinking about this as she rode on her "training bike" to the 4th of July party. She was riding down main street and looking at the city hall building.

She waved at Jessica as she sped by in her Honda, but Jessica simply ignored her and kept on driving quickly past. Dani noted how odd it was that Jessica drove her car everywhere. Most folks rode theri training bikes around.

Dani was a fine example of one who lived on her training bike. She had actually bought a basket that you could take on and off, and when she needed to transport something to and from she tossed the basket on and loaded up.

In her basket today she had lots of desserts and a bunch of fireworks that she had driven with her father almost a full day's trip to find. She was excited and was humming a song by the band "Queen".

Dani wasn't beautiful like Jessica, but she wasn't ugly like TR. TR wasn't too ugly either, so that doesn't help. Let me explain.

Dani had sholder length blond hair and big blue eyes. She had a bittle bit of acne, but it got covered up with makeup so it was barely visible. She didn't have as great of a body as Jessica either, but she was still thin. And unlike Jessica, she did not wear revealing clothes. The most immodest thing Dani ever wore was a tank top that she had bought from a national aobut two years before.

As she rode she saw the "three stooges" as Dani called them. David, Andy and Matt, who were on their training bikes riding towards the party too.

"This is going to be one heck of a party." Dani said smiling brightly.

In Crupiville, noone ever had to worry about someone not being able to jump a double- unless like Dani they had moved in there. There was only a few people who couldn't (like Jason Gallo, and Dani and some of the younger kids who were under the ages of four).

At the fourth of July party that night, noone worried about it at all.

In the feild they had built a "bike park" basically. They had made a halfpipe out of wood, and built a ton of jumps and ramps and laid them in the feild. Almost all of the kids (and alot of the adults too) were out there. (Well, except for Jessica. She was never out there, she was too "girly.")